April 25, 2010 Changes to rough cut
As one can see I have made many changes from my rough cut to my final product. The narrative has changed significantly. Instead of seeing Sophie being strangled it is left to the imagination of the audience, this adding to the suspense. The length of the film was also far too long and so I thought it best to cut out the shots of Sophie walking through the park and talking to her mum, due to this the narrative had to change as well. This time Sophie’s friends do not find her but, instead, I have introduced another character into the narrative. I thought it best to make these certain changes as it entices the audience more as they have to really think about the narrative and therefore adds to the psychological aspect of my thriller.
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